[Elmira, ] [N. Y. ], [May 10, 1870. ]
[I guess I am out of the field permanently ]. [I am sending off [these circulars ] to [all ] lecture [applicants ] now.1 If you want some more of them ] [I can send them to you ] [—for they are very convenient for you to mail to people & save penmanship. ]
[Have got a lovely wife, a lovely [house, ] bewitchingly [furnished ], a lovely [carriage, ] [& a ] coachman whose style & dignity are simply [awe-inspiring—]nothing [less; ] 2 [& ] I am making more money than [necessary, ] by [considerable, ] [& ] [therefore ] why crucify myself [nightly ] on the platform ]. [The subscriber will have to be excused from the present season at least. ]
[Remember me to Nasby, Billings ] [& ] [Fall. ] [Luck to you! ] [I am going to print your menagerie, Parton and all, and make comments.3
In next Galaxy I give Nasby’s friend and mine from Philadelphia (John Quill, a literary thief) a “hyste.” ] [I don’t consider that the Rev. Talmage has the weather gage of me yet. ] 4
Explanatory Notes | Textual Commentary
Source text(s):
P1 | Will M. Clemens 1900, 27 |
P2 | MTB, 1:409–10 |
P3 | MTL, 1:172–73 |
P4 | Anderson Galleries 1919, lot 176 |
P5 | Parke-Bernet 1950, lot 241 |
Previous publication:
L4, 128–129; Horner, 165–66; “Letters to James
Redpath,” Mark Twain Quarterly 5
(Winter–Spring 1942): 19, in addition to texts listed under Copy-text.
Emendations, adopted readings, and textual notes:
No copy-text. The letter is reconstructed from five partial transcripts, each of which derived independently from the MS:
Will Clemens evidently transcribed the P1 text from the MS before 1900. Albert Bigelow Paine must have seen and transcribed the MS before 1912 when he published the short excerpt in P2, and he may have used the same transcription or made a second one before 1917, when he published the longer excerpts in P3. Both catalog texts were transcribed directly from the MS when it was advertised for sale, P4 in 1919 and P5 in 1950. P4 describes it as ‘A. L. S., (signed “Mark”), 2 pages, 4to, Elmira, N. Y., May 10, 1870,’ and P5 includes a similar description.
Elmira, • [reported, not quoted] (P4, P5); Elmira, (P1, P3); [not in] (P2)
N. Y., (P1) • [reported, not quoted] (P4); N. Y.‸ (P3); [not in] (P2, P5)
May 10, 1870. (P1) • [reported, not quoted] (P4, P5); May 10, 1870. (P3); [not in] (P2)
[no ¶] Friend Redpath,— • [no ¶] Friend Redpath: (P1); [¶] Friend Redpath,— (P3); [not in] (P2, P4, P5)
[¶] I . . . permanently. (P1, P2) • [no ¶] I . . . permanently. (P3, P5); [not in] (P4)
I . . . them (P1, P5) • [not in] (P2, P3, P4)
these circulars • those circulars (P1); these (P5)
all (P1) • [not in] (P5)
applicants (P1) • applicants, (P5)
I . . . you • I . . . you. (P1); [not in] (P2, P3, P4, P5)
—for . . . penmanship. (P5) • [not in] (P1, P2, P3, P4)
[¶] Have . . . platform. (P3, P4) • [no ¶] Have . . . platform? (P2); [not in] (P1, P5)
house, (P2, P3) • house‸ (P4)
furnished, (P2, P4) • furnished; (P3)
carriage, (P2, P3) • carriage‸ (P4)
& a (P4) • and a (P2 ,P3)
awe-inspiring— (P3) • awe-|in-spiring (P2); awe-|inspiring (P4)
less; (P2) • less— (P3); less. (P4)
& • and (P2, P3); And (P4)
necessary, (P2, P4) • necessary— (P3)
considerable, (P2, P3) • considerable— (P4)
& (P4) • and (P2, P3)
therefore (P2, P3) • therefore, (P4)
nightly (P2, P3) • nightly, (P4)
The . . . least. (P1, P2, P3) • [not in] (P4, P5)
[¶] Remember . . . Billings (P1, P3, P5) • [no ¶] Remember . . . Billings (P4, P5); [not in] (P2)
& (P4, P5) • and (P1, P3); [not in] (P2)
Fall. (P1, P3, P4) • Fall‸ (P5); [not in] (P2)
Luck to you!; (P1, P3) • [not in] (P2, P4, P5)
I . . . “hyste.” (P3) • [not in] (P1, P2, P4, P5)
I . . . yet. (P4) • [not in] (P1, P2, P3, P5)
Yours . . . after, (P1) • Yours . . . after. (P3); [not in] (P2, P4, P5)
& • and (P1, P3)
Mark. • Mark. (P1, P3); Mark (P4, P5); [not in] (P2)